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参加SAT写作考试让很多人比较头疼,同学们需要注意总结SAT写作材料以及SAT写作真题,同时也一定要注意避免一些错误,下面天道留学小编就来给大家详细介绍一下,希望能给同学们带来帮助。

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  参加SAT写作考试让很多人比较头疼,同学们需要注意总结SAT写作材料以及SAT写作真题,同时也一定要注意避免一些错误,下面天道留学小编就来给大家详细介绍一下,希望能给同学们带来帮助。

  其实很多学生在语言运用、语句结构、段落组织上都很欠缺,多数学生的文章只是平铺直叙,没有感染力,今天我们就来看一位学生的文章,写作老师给出了修改和点评,都是大部分学生容易犯的错误,希望学习以后能够对大家提高写作有所帮助。

  学生习作

  People often focus mostly on the advantageous side when they make a decision. Thus they often neglect the other side of the decision, which may lead to an unpleasant end. My family was also not able to avoid this kind of regrettable experience. From that failure, we should see both sides of an issue.

  语言修改

  Most often when people make a decision they focus on the advantages. Thus they often neglect the other side of the decision, which may lead to an unpleasant end. My family was also not able to avoid this kind of regrettable experience. From that failure, we should see both sides of an issue.

  本段评点

  许多学生过多地使用了therefore和thus. 这样的词是用来得出结论的。“很多人只看有利的一面而忽视不利的一面”这句话中用“而”或者“并且”连接两个分句,而不可以使用 therefore, thus, as a result 等表达。这样导致问题这两个方面的逻辑关系混乱,其实并不是因为人们只看有利面而导致忽视不利一面这个结果。建议大家一定注重总结SAT写作材料,勤加练习SAT写作真题。

  学生习作

  My family used to live in a village, but my parents went to urban to work and I to study. It was a long distance, so we had to spend an average of 3.5 hours in our car everyday. We had to get up early to set out and return home late at night. Moreover, we could not watch TV together, but be together in the car, feeling sleepy. Of course, we were unwilling to accept the situation and we thought of moving to the urban area to save our time and to live a more convenient life. So we did, half a year ago.

  语言修改

  My family used to live in a village, but my parents moved[1] to the city to work and I to study. It was a long distance to travel to the city every day with an average of 3.5 hours spent in our car.[2] We had to get up early to set out and return home late at night. Unlike other families that watch TV or have other fun together, we spent hours in a car, which was boring and even painful. Of course, this situation was unacceptable to us so we thought of moving to the city to save time and make our lives more convenient.[3]. So we did, half a year ago.

  本段评点

  文章这个例子的叙述过于细节化,显得有些琐碎,这也导致这个例子用了三段来叙述,占了大量的篇幅和写作时间,使得作者可能无法再写个例子。另外,这段中的句式也缺少变化,例如大部分句子都是We再加上一个谓语这样的结构。

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